The story so far:
Jim Sterling bursts into the Sharkade and enlists the help of Hamza Aziz. Sterling explains that not only has the President has been kidnapped by ninjas, but that there is also a much greater threat afoot. Hamza, relishing the opportunity for some action, transforms into his alter ego … Cybernetic Tiger Z! Together they head outside, to confront the problem.
This weeks winning comment was from Palidi:
Ahh, the last frame might conflict with my next idea, but I’ll try anyhow:
Jim and Hamza dash outside to investigate the noise, and are confronted with the sight of the giant Destructor-toid approaching from the distance(in a pane something like the first scene of page one, but with the Destructor-toid seen on the visible side of the mountains). Jim mutters to himself that “That wasn’t there before”
Hamza uses the zoom function built into his visor to get a closer view of the Destructor-toid, asking Jim if that’s the extent of their problems … (Full comment after the jump)
I did deviate a little from the the outline that was given, but this was just to organize it a little better on page. (You’d be surprised how little space I have to work with). The main points of the comment are there though.
THE RULES:
1. You have 24 hours from the time this blog was posted to suggest what happens next. After that, I’ll choose the winning comment and the page will then be posted the following week.
2. Try to keep it relatively SFW.
3. You can only make a suggestion once per week.
4. Your suggestion has to fit on one page.
Where do they go from here? Hit the jump for the previous comics.
Palidi’s entire suggestion:
“I think it may be a bother, but there is still a more pressing matter”
“Hmm?”
Jim lowers his shotgun and turns to Hamza.
“It appears that the situation is changing…and Neiro is still missing”
Hamza slings his hammer onto his shoulder as the shadow of the Destructor-toid is cast upon them. “Neiro, missing? Then who the hell is controlling that?”
End Scene
Previous pages:
Cover
Page #1: When it rains, it pours
Page #2: Enter … THE SHARK!
