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Passion Project: Project S.O.S. (Chapter 4)

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Chapter 2 
Chapter 3
 

Chapter 4 - Again, since a lot of the text was about the erotica, I'm going to do my best to summarize what happened. So, the guy starts foreplaying with the pizza delivery girl, and started eating her out. I'm reading that I compared her clit to an "antennae" that needs to be adjusted for better "reception," and I cringed a little inside. Then I evidently compared the guy's tongue to a "paint brush" with a "coat of saliva" ready to make her vagina "sleek and shiny." My goodness, just kill me now. >^< Anyway, while all of this is happening, Hikaru and Manami are both kind of "embarrassed," so they kind of "withdraw" a little... but since both of them are thinking the other is into this, neither of them wants to stop watching.

Apparently, I still have more cringey comparisons! I'm reading that I compared the woman's mouth to a "bucket of water" that the man needs to "scrub" his second "brush" off with — the penis — and that the globs of "residue" on his "brush" has been sticking around for quite a while. The man then grabs the woman by the hair to "dunk" his brush deep inside her, and while Hikaru winces how painful it looks, Manami looks like she wants that to happen to her. Despite that, Hikaru notices that he's getting aroused by the video, so since he's sitting next to Manami, it's awkward... but Manami has her eyes glued to the screen.


(Art by atobesakunolove)

When the woman finishes licking up all of the cum, noting that it's as gooey as the pizza she had earlier, she gets on the bed and spread herself wide open. At this point, the video suddenly pauses, and Manami turns to Hikaru and asks if he wants a better look. Hikaru is obviously flustered, asking "why would I want to do that?", and Manami points out that it's because he spent a lot of time "staring" at Manami's when she was masturbating. Hikaru defends himself by saying that he didn't move because he was so shocked — comparing himself to a "deer in headlights" — then asks Manami why didn't she cover herself up. She tells Hikaru not to talk during the movie.

"What?" Hikaru chuckles, "You started it!"

"And now I'm ending it." she sticks a tongue at him.

So the guy and the pizza delivery girl starts having sex, and there's a lot more moaning than there was before. Similar to when people "check" on their friends when they're watching a movie together to see if they're enjoying it, Hikaru and Manami both kind of try to sneak a peek at the other while not making direct eye contact. Again, since I'm more of a visual storyteller, I don't think I've written this part right, and definitely have no idea how to properly convey it in text either. Regardless, in an effort to break the silence between the two — a stark contrast to their joking behavior earlier — Manami says something lewd, which causes Hikaru to fluster.


(Art by asahina hikage)

"Please don't say something like that to your brother," Hikaru winces.

"Sorry, but you're just soooooooo cute!" Manami apologizes.

"Please don't say something like that to your brother when he's watching porn," Hikaru smirks.

Get ready for another cringy moment. So, when Manami tries to smack Hikaru as a joke, he tries to defend himself. She, being the oldest and larger of the two — man, I always had a thing for being overpowered by women — manages to pin him down. So, in an effort to escape, Hikaru grabs one of Manami's stuffed animals — a snake — and whips it at her, knocking her on her back. In order to defend herself, Manami picks up a giant stuffed cat to block his attacks and... well, you can see where I'm going with this. Hikaru would sling his snake at Manami's cat while she's saying things like "stop pounding my pussy with your giant snake!"

Eventually, Manami sees an opening and tackles Hikaru to bed, trying to smother him with her stuffed cat. "How do you like my pussy in your face?" she'd say. Hikaru tells her that he can't breathe, but Manami tells him that he's not getting out until she's satisfied. Hikaru then turns his head towards the TV to breathe, then tells Manami that they're missing the good part. Distracted, Manami eagerly turn towards the TV — drool coming out of her mouth — but when the people in the video are "just having sex," Manami asks "what 'good part?'" Hikaru would then smack her with his snake, winning the fight.


(Artist unknown)

After a couple of laughs, Manami asks Hikaru if they want to do this again. Hikaru jokes that they can't because she "broke his snake", but when Manami clarifies that she meant watching porn, Hikaru says "why not." He notes that the porn video is still going, and they have a few conversations teasing each other. It's a little cringy, but essentially, Hikaru would joke how "unrealistic" the porn video is, but Manami tells Hikaru that since he watches hentai, he can't make those kinds of claims. She points out that "boobs don't bounce like basketballs", but Hikaru retorts that she's just mad because her breasts can't.

Then Manami tells Hikaru that his penis size is nothing like the guys in any of their porn videos, which Hikaru is defensive of. He says that it's a cheap shot because, unlike breasts, penis size is crucial for having sex, as boobs are just decoration. He then suddenly asks her how does she even know his penis size, and before she "answers," her stomach starts growling, She uses it as an excuse to walk away from the subject, so, despite how eager Hikaru is to know the answer, they decide to get something to eat. When Hikaru pauses the video though, he notices that there's still an hour left in the video. Wondering what happens next, he fast-forwards it to see that the partygoers have arrived just in time to see them having sex, so they turn the "party" into an orgy.

"An orgy?" Hikaru raises a brow, "You wanted the first porn video we watch to be an orgy?"

"It didn't start out as an orgy," Manami twiddles her fingers, "It just sorta escalades into one..."


(Art by dl)

After Manami makes Hikaru promise to finish the video, the two go into the kitchen to get something to eat. However, since the two have been avoiding each other by staying locked up in their rooms, neither of them had time to go shopping. Hikaru suggests that they could order a pizza, but Manami — after crushing Hikaru's hopes that "not all delivery girls want to have sex" — tells Hikaru that she's hungry now. Hikaru then asks what she wants to do, and she says she wants to go to the Pop Rock Diner. She then tells Hikaru to get ready while she go get changed. When she comes out, she's dressed in a rather fancy dress.

"Aren't you a little too well-dressed?" Hikaru asks.

"Can't a girl look nice?" Manami teases him with a wink and a smile.

"You want to look nice going to dinner with her brother?" Hikaru cocks his head, "Isn't that kind of sad?"

"So you're saying I should go change?" Manami pulls her thumb towards her room, "You better say I look nice, because I know you're just as hungry as I am."

Obviously, he says that she looks nice and they get going. When they arrive at the restaurant, Manami asks what's up with Hikaru, since it's been a while since they last seen each other. Hikaru tries to say everything's fine, but Manami knows that he's thinking about something else. She tries to comfort him by saying she's here for him, and Hikaru acknowledges that... but still doesn't say what's bothering him. Suddenly, Manami looks over Hikaru's shoulder, tells him that "this will cheer him up", then gets up from her seat to wave Hitomi over. Hikaru immediately stops her and drags her to hide with him under the table.


(Art by kousei (public planet))

Once Manami breaks free, she asks Hikaru what's going on. Hikaru tries to weasal his way out of it by saying that he wants to surprise Hitomi, and that Manami would ruin his attempt, but Manami knows that he's lying. Regardless, Hikaru hopes underneath his breath that Hitomi wouldn't be seated in the booth next to theirs... but since the diner is packed tonight like it usually is, it's the "only" seat available. With this, Hikaru curses underneath his breath.

"Damn the Goddess," Hikaru curses softly.

"Hikaru!" Manami reprimands Hikaru for saying Her title in vain.

"I'm pretty sure She had something to do with this," Hikaru looks away.

Since the chapter ends here, let me explain some things. As I said, all of my stories are connected, so they exist in the same universe. Instead of using a real religion — actually, the other religions might also exist, but used as different beliefs, like how the real world have multiple religions — most of my characters believe in the Goddess religion. As such, I wanted them to say things like Brianna's "Goddess fucking damn it" in order to kind of help keep things religiously sensitive without outright denying religion exists. There's also a mythos that gets detailed in some of the fantasy projects I wanted to work on, but not now!

- "Petals dance for our valediction and synchronize to your frozen pulsation... Swirling wind sings for our reunion and 9.8 is my acceleration." - Mili


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If you want to know more about me, you can check out my contribution to the "10 things about ourselves" blog, that Mr. Andy Dixon asked us all to write as well as any other personal blogs here:

"10 Thing about Me!"

"Top 10 Favorite Videogames!

"Most Life-Changing Game"

"Top 10 Fetishes"

I also used to write blogs about videogame themed doujinshi (yes, really). There aren't many written yet, but the few that are written can be seen here. If you enjoy these, feel free to message me on any recommendations, suggestions, or if one of the images I've chosen is too naughty. :P


Part 1: Monster Hunter and Kid Icarus: Uprising

Part 2: Demons Souls and Darkstalker

Part 3: Blazblue

Part 4: Super Mario Brothers

Part 5: [email protected]

Part 6: Persona 4

Splatoon (no doujinshi)

I don't just restrict myself to videogames though!

Two Siblings - Fela Pure

The Amazing World of Gumball porn (ya, really)

The Amazing World of Gumball porn part 2: Nicole Watterson edition!

Let's get a little (gay) hentai in here (NSFW!)

I'm not horsing around, but she is! (Oh, this is totally NSFW)

Another one of Dreamweaver's fetish blogs! You know you want some! (NSFW)

I also have done a couple of Comments of the Week! Check out some of the articles here!

Comments of the Week 1 - Prototype

Comments of the Week 2 - Ready for Round 2?

Comments of the Week 3 - Rhyme for Reasons

Comments of the Week 4 - Oh, dream-maker, you heart breaker...

Comments of the Week 5 - Number 5 has arrived!

Comments of the Week 6 - Better check the clock...

Comments of the Week 7 - From out of the blue!

Comments of the Week 8 - Alive once again!

Comments of the Week 9 - Robo Revolution!

Comments of the Week 10 - Don't need no Facebook

Comments of the Week 11 - Just can't live with you

Comments of the Week 12 - Crazy creations

Comments of the Week 13 - Just another day

Comments of the Week 14 - Prototype Pt.2

Comments of the Week 15 - It was just a Tuesday edition

Comments of the Week 16 - What you've been waiting for

Comments of the Week 17 - Monday surprise

Comments of the Week 18 - Kick that candy bar, I got a bounty for y'all

Comments of the Week 19 - The "Why am I not playing Splatoon right now?" edition

Comments of the Week 20 - "What the what!?" edition

Comments of the Week 21 - This tastes funny

Comments of the Week 22 - E3 2015 Edition

Comments of the Week 23 - A little too happy

Comments of the Week 24 - Am I doing it right?

Comments of the Week 25 - Doing things in the dark

Comments of the Week 26 - What's going on over there?

Comments of the Week 27 - Go ahead. Swallow.

Comments of the Week 28 - Let's all gather 'round!

Comments of the Week 29 - Can't get it up edition

Comments of the Week 30 - Keep crushing my weiners

Comments of the Week 31 - Don't open that door!

Comments of the Week 32 - Don't be scared, come inside

Comments of the Week 33 - Don't try this at home

Comments of the Week 34 - That kid's kawaii

Comments of the Week 35 - Major... I'M BURNING UP!

Comments of the Week 36 - You have eyes. What do your eyes see?

Comments of the Week 37 - In a place they'd never look.

Comments of the Week 38 - So our country could win.

Comments of the Week 39 - It makes a man hideous.

Comments of the Week 40 - Time for a taste test.

Comments of the Week 41 - Trick or Treat edition

Comments of the Week 42 - iDroid edition

Comments of the Week 43 - Atom bomb baby, little atom bomb

Comments of the Week 44 - Shadow of the Night

Comments of the Week 45 - バーガーベスト, ですよね?

Comments of the Week 46 - The Gift of Family

Comments of the Week 47 - My Gift to You

Comments of the Week 48 - Praise the Goddess, SANTA'S COMING!

Comments of the Week 49 - CHRISTMAS is OVER? Goddess damn it!

Comments of the Week 50 - We made it!

Comments of the Week 51 - The one after the blackout

Comments of the Week 52 - MY CANDY BAR! (featuring Mike Martin)

Comments of the Week 53 - Who in the world wished for snow?

Comments of the Week 54 - You're creeping me out

Comments of the Week 55 - Love Love Love

Comments of the Week 56 - Lots of Love

Comments of the Week 57 - New look, same great taste!

Comments of the Week 58 - Better late than never

Comments of the Week 59 - The 'still a week behind' edition!

Comments of the Week 60 - Don't reach for the remote, this is not a rerun!

Comments of the Week 61 - Still trying to catch up

Comments of the Week 62 - Working overtime

Comments of the Weel 63 - You're not seeing double!

Comments of the Week 64 - The reason why I'm not playing Quantum Break right now

Comments of the Week 65 - Take a break from Dark Souls III, you earned it.

Comments of the Week 66 - Take a load off!

Comments of the Week 67 - I needs it!

Comments of the Week 68 - Now we wait for Overwatch to come out.

Comments of the Week 69 - I see what you did there.

Comments of the Week 70 - We're all soldiers now.

Comments of the Week 71 - I will be watching over you.

Comments of the Week 72 - Die... Die... DIE...

Comments of the Week 73 - Ready to go primal

Comments of the Week 74 - E3 2016 Edition

Comments of the Week 75 - Activating self-destruct sequence!

Comments of the Week 76 - The 99.537% Reality

Behind the scenes look at Comments of the Week (Also, fuck it, totally NSFW!)

And just for giggles, here's a couple of blogs that I've personally enjoyed writing myself!

Videogame references in The Amazing World of Gumball (not porn edition)!

Pokemon Rap - Dibs on Miltank

Band of Bloggers: Stories from the Capital Wasteland

A Fantasy Fulfilled: Adventuring Akihabara

Short Story: Love Over Time (videogame related)

Ice Climbers fan fiction part 1: Siblings of the Summit

Ice Climbers fan fiction part 2: Siblings of the Stadium

Ice Climber fan fiction part 3: Siblings of the Subspace
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