Second attempt at dialog screenwriting now available

Hey folks!

So last week, I shared with you some news regarding a series of changes to my writing endeavors. In that article, I mentioned that I would start penning more creative works in order to hone my storytelling and dialog-writing chops. Coinciding with that announcement was the publication of a conversation sample that I produced using Final Draft. The script received both positive feedback and constructive criticism, which compelled me to continue exploring that field to test the waters of non-fiction narrative. 

Recently I finished writing my follow-up to the aforementioned script which you can find below. Like its predecessor, the file is just a rough draft that I wrote in my spare time and I understand that there might still be a few quirks here and there. But as the age-old aphorism goes, "practice makes perfect":

https://www.dropbox.com/s/fs4q2i8so3895n3/NPC%20Dialog%20attempt%202%20sample.pdf?dl=0

Again, your feedback would be strongly appreciated. Thank you for taking the time to read this and happy reading!

LOOK WHO CAME:

Michformer   

Michformer   16

Retrofraction   3