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The story so far:

A large automaton, closely resembling Niero's alter ego, is destroying downtown Destructoid City. Jim Sterling, along with Cybernetic Tiger Z come to the conclusion the Niero is being framed. Unable to take on the giant robot themselves, CTZ call in the help of the almighty RetroforceGO!, a crack team of individuals whose skills were honed during the old school era, when games were unforgiving ... and near impossible.

This weeks winning comment was from Technophile... kinda...

Panel 1: CTZ says "It could be Bernard, Crecente, or any number of people really. First things first, we should find Niero and get that thing back under his control"

Jim says "You're right. Let's go find the rest of the crew"

Panel 2: With that, they jump down off the roof to the docks and we see two vehicles. One is the jimmobile, it looks like this.
The other is the Sharkmobile. It's like the bike from Dark Knight only with a big ol shark head where the front headlight is.
(Full suggestion after the jump)

I had a little trouble with this one. I did try to get the scene with Jim and CTZ's vehicles in, but the page was way too squashed. Unfortunately, I had to omit it and just use the RetroforceGO! introduction. 

THE RULES:
1. You have 24 hours from the time this blog was posted to suggest what happens next. After that, I'll choose the winning comment and the page will then be posted the following week.

2. Try to keep it relatively SFW.

3. You can only make a suggestion once per week.

4. Your suggestion has to fit on one page.

Will the next page be the big action scene? You decide! Leave a comment with your suggestion for the next page.

Previous pages
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Page #1: When it rains, it pours
Page #2: Enter ... THE SHARK!
Page #3: The plot thickens!

Panel 3: Hamza turns on the comm screen on the bike "Retroforce? Do you copy?"

[Panel 3 inset]

Five people are on the view screen in shadow. The one in the middle says "Hamza, so good to hear from you..."

Panel 4: The full panel is the view screen. The figures have stepped forward. It's Dyson in the front middle, Chad and Colette on the left and Topher and Stella on the right. All of them armed for battle.

Dyson says "I take it Retroforce is a GO?"

And end. :D
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Guagloves's Avatar - Comment posted on 02/10/2009 21:11
Guagloves
Awesome as always. I really like your art style :)
Colette Bennett's Avatar - Comment posted on 02/10/2009 21:12
Colette Bennett
Oh my god. That's ME!

WOW!
TheRemedy's Avatar - Comment posted on 02/10/2009 21:12
TheRemedy
Dyson looks like a modern day Captain N, something I greatly approve of.
Brian Szabelski's Avatar - Comment posted on 02/10/2009 21:13
Brian Szabelski
Mikey, are you Jesus?

Seriously, because you have the kind of amazing drawing skills that make me consider that.
Topher Cantler's Avatar - Comment posted on 02/10/2009 21:14
Topher Cantler
OMG WHAT
Samit Sarkar's Avatar - Comment posted on 02/10/2009 21:14
Samit Sarkar
Oh man, this is phenomenal, as usual. I love how Dyson's wearing a Power Glove!
garison's Avatar - Comment posted on 02/10/2009 21:14
garison
I find myself so sexually attracted to the cast of RFGO right now.
Stella Wong's Avatar - Comment posted on 02/10/2009 21:16
Stella Wong
HOLY CRAP THIS IS AWESOME.
Jaren Face's Avatar - Comment posted on 02/10/2009 21:18
Jaren Face
Oh... My... God...

That was... oh my.

Excuse me while I go change my pants and start on building m shrine of you.
pedrovay2003's Avatar - Comment posted on 02/10/2009 21:19
pedrovay2003
Heh, another awesome entry. :D
Colette Bennett's Avatar - Comment posted on 02/10/2009 21:19
Colette Bennett
Mikey? Does a super high res version exist? Also, I love you.
Jesus H Christ's Avatar - Comment posted on 02/10/2009 21:20
Jesus H Christ
HAHA THIS IS GR8888~~~1
Teta's Avatar - Comment posted on 02/10/2009 21:20
Teta
Holly shit I creamed my pants.
Dyson's Avatar - Comment posted on 02/10/2009 21:22
Dyson
1: I'm somehow going to put this on my business cards.

2. It's fucking AWESOME.

3. It's so fucking awesome that there will never be anything more awesome than this on the Internet - ever. Shut it down, folks. Shut it all down, Mikey wins!
Jamie McGinn's Avatar - Comment posted on 02/10/2009 21:23
Jamie McGinn
What the I don't even
Puppy Licks's Avatar - Comment posted on 02/10/2009 21:25
Puppy Licks
best page yet, bonus points for the clever use of the RFGO intro quote as well :D

Is Summa going to be the Villain in this? Or will it be Heretic or Wiisucks maybe?
Y0j1mb0's Avatar - Comment posted on 02/10/2009 21:25
Y0j1mb0
EPIC.
Midgetsnowman's Avatar - Comment posted on 02/10/2009 21:29
Midgetsnowman
To paraphrase Chad.

THAT IS AMAZIIIING
Stella Wong's Avatar - Comment posted on 02/10/2009 21:31
Stella Wong
Great job Mikey, There's so much OMFG AWESOME pouring out of that panel. GREAT WORK!
Mikey's Avatar - Comment posted on 02/10/2009 21:35
Mikey
:D Thank yoooooou.
icarus's Avatar - Comment posted on 02/10/2009 21:35
icarus
Awesome stuff.
Xhumation's Avatar - Comment posted on 02/10/2009 21:36
Xhumation
That's made out of pure awesome.

Great job Mikey!
Tubatic's Avatar - Comment posted on 02/10/2009 21:37
Tubatic
As always Mikey, you're rocking this joint.

At this point, we need some action, I think. A little excitement to set the stage for the RetroForce and their talent. Any evil army needs a foot soldier:

Robot Wolves.

As the RetroForceGo! Crew saddle up (They're gonna need a few vehicles, including the Amazing-Marine (Like the Rush-Marine, but with a dolphin) and a Shooter Ship, with Option Pods (to hold passengers even).

As the crew is about to roll out, the glowing eyes and faces of sinister Robot Wolves appear. "Its a trap!". RetroForce flexes their awesome skills against a few lupine minions to play out the page.
snotrocket's Avatar - Comment posted on 02/10/2009 21:39
snotrocket
Pure awesomeness! I love how Chad is in a blue leotard.
TheDeadSpace's Avatar - Comment posted on 02/10/2009 21:39
TheDeadSpace
... amazing just amazing. I love how there are so many creative people on d-toid, btw chad has to be my favorite chracter, then topher, colette, stella and then dyson.
iconsam's Avatar - Comment posted on 02/10/2009 21:39
iconsam
That's amazing. Phenomenal work Mikey!
Camelpope's Avatar - Comment posted on 02/10/2009 21:47
Camelpope
Last panel of that comic...I WANT as a backround...can that happen please?
Mikey's Avatar - Comment posted on 02/10/2009 21:48
Mikey
Chad's costume is a Batman/Mega Man/Aquaman mix.
Red TheHaze Veron's Avatar - Comment posted on 02/10/2009 21:50
Red TheHaze Veron
MAKE THIS THE NEW HEADER PIC FOR RETROFORCEGO NAOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
AgentMOO's Avatar - Comment posted on 02/10/2009 21:50
AgentMOO
It's the BEST PAGE EVVVEEEEEERR!
Sterling Aiayla Lyons's Avatar - Comment posted on 02/10/2009 21:53
Sterling Aiayla Lyons
I don't really wanna submit another idea so soon to give other people a shot, but hell...

I wanna see an anti-climax happen. The Retroforce crew all get in their respective forms of transportation and arrive on the scene to have all their "vehicles" transform into a giant robot roughly 3/4 the size of the Destructor-toid.

The Destructor-toid is nowhere to be seen though. They all look down to see Jim and Hamza standing there looking kinda embarrased with Destructor-toid wreckage on the ground behind them.

"Umm...sorry guys. False alarm I guess" says Hamza over the radio to the Retroforce crew.


In all seriousness though, I'm awestruck of your work Mikey. I'm interested to know how you're going to handle action scenes though as I would figure they might be too much content for just one page.
Lunarmoth's Avatar - Comment posted on 02/10/2009 21:57
Lunarmoth
hahaha... best day ever. hahahahah...
JDUB X's Avatar - Comment posted on 02/10/2009 21:59
JDUB X
OMG I WANT THAT TO BE THE ALBUM ART FOR RETROFORCEGO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

YOU ARE AMAZING!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
gatorsax2010's Avatar - Comment posted on 02/10/2009 21:59
gatorsax2010
YES

Here's my suggestion:

Dyson looks at the assembled members of RetroforceGO! "Ready to commence Operation: Hi-Score?" Colette hops aboard her trusty Chocobo. "Something smells worse than the title of your average WiiWare game. There's no way Niero's behind this. I'll go ahead and scout Ground Zero." Chad looks to the ocean. "I might be able to organize an assault from the ocean side... I have a few friends out there." Stella steps forward with a look of grim determination. "You won't even be able to smell that robot's farts when we're done with it." Chad winces. "I don't like the sound of that, can you say 'puppy licks' instead?" Dyson turns. "Topher?" A close up of Topher's face. He slowly takes a sip of his slurpie. A slight grin appears at the corner of his mouth. The final panel shows an aerial view of the city, shmup-style, with the Destructor-toid at the top, looming like a giant end-boss. At the bottom, a ship resembling a dog-bee (bee-dog?) flies towards the giant robot. "Time to reverse polarity on this son of a bitch."
Ben Perlee's Avatar - Comment posted on 02/10/2009 22:01
Ben Perlee
I want Conrad to have rosetinted glasses that shoot lasers, and Brad Nicholson needs to bring tickets to the gun show. Or call a vet, cause these puppies are sick. Or show how big the beach ball is.

Cause,you know, he apparently has huge arms.

Also, HAWP should make a cameo.
Krusayder's Avatar - Comment posted on 02/10/2009 22:01
Krusayder
IT'S SO GOOOOD!
Looptron's Avatar - Comment posted on 02/10/2009 22:03
Looptron
This is the best comic ever. For serious.
zeph's Avatar - Comment posted on 02/10/2009 22:05
zeph
The main image needs to be a high resolution wallpaper or the main image for the Retroforce Go Podcast page. Like usual, keep up the great job!
RonBurgandy2010's Avatar - Comment posted on 02/10/2009 22:10
RonBurgandy2010
I wish I had some suggestions, but this isn't really my thing.

@Mikey
Also, PAX. 2010. Be there.
Spelunking raccoon's Avatar - Comment posted on 02/10/2009 22:10
Spelunking raccoon
Damn that's awesome. Seriously awesome. Major AWE-SOME-NESS
Fronz's Avatar - Comment posted on 02/10/2009 22:12
Fronz
OMG YES! This just gets better and better each week, it's so damn good. Keep on impressing!

As for possible suggestions for later in the storyline for me -- maybe there will be some nefarious plot they're trying to unravel and solve, that eventually leads to a puzzle. Be it DaVinci Code style, National Treasure style, or just simply some complicated puzzle game on a big screen that they need to solve to figure out the meaning of something -- I could be the Mind Teaser guy who looks at a complicated screen and puts the pieces together.

Also, if in act three you need someone to take a bullet for Niero to elevate the stakes of the story, I'd totally sacrifice myself to the last boss so Niero lives on and wins the game.

As for what my avatar dude could be like -- always wears headphones. Always. Uses CDs/DVDs as ninja stars, uses a Wacom tablet as a shield, and a PC mouse as a swinging weapon like a nunchuk or a lasso to get from place to place over big gaps. And wears samurai armor made out of keyboards tied to my arms, legs and chest :) When you hit me the keys go flying everywhere.

Seriously dude, keep it up, I can't wait to see where things go.
SephirothX's Avatar - Comment posted on 02/10/2009 22:14
SephirothX
holy shit this is awesome

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My suggestion!
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The Retroforce gets ready to depart on a series of motorcycles resembling various classic controllers. As the rev their engines another character hops on the back of Dyson's bike. This new character is a brown eyed lanky moderately tall person of caucasian complexion with brown afro styled hair wearing a green t-shirt and a pair of standard blue jeans.

Dyson: "Who the heck are you?"

Colette: "And how did you even get here?"

Mysterious New Person: "Call me X, I'm here to help you."

Topher: "How the hell do you think you can help?"

X: "There's one thing this monstrosity isn't anticipating..."

Colette: "What's that?"

X: "...A noob."

*A single frame profiling the entrance of 'X the Noob' is shown. The Retroforce GO's with the noob known as X towards the crisis that Jim and Cybernetic Tiger Z are currently observing*

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SephirothX's Avatar - Comment posted on 02/10/2009 22:16
SephirothX
(X the noob = me, see Xbox Live / Destructoid Avatar for obvious reference). I know, stupid to include 'me' into it but I wanted to at least attempt something silly and humorous in it.
F Whipple's Avatar - Comment posted on 02/10/2009 22:17
F Whipple
Holy crap! Dude......awesome!!
PsychoSoldier's Avatar - Comment posted on 02/10/2009 22:18
PsychoSoldier
All right here is my try at this.

Everyone is seen at the edge of the destroyed city looking at the destruction caused by the Destructor-toid. Silent for a moment the team steps forward about to take on the gaint robot but suddenly they all hear a voice coming from ahead.
"Sorry guys but I can't let you do that."
Out from the shadows emerges Rev Anthony decked out in his version of Gordon Freemen's hazard suit while holding a crowbar. The others are shocked and speechless.
"If you want to get to the robot you go through us."
As soon as he finishes five more shadows step to the frontline.
Ben Perlee's Avatar - Comment posted on 02/10/2009 22:21
Ben Perlee
Oh Noes! SepherothX is trying to Mary Jane it!
SephirothX's Avatar - Comment posted on 02/10/2009 22:25
SephirothX
@Ben PerLee
haha, na just tryin to try something different for the sake of a cheap laugh.
Kinji's Avatar - Comment posted on 02/10/2009 22:25
Kinji
This comic is so awesome! Does Dyson have Virtual Boy goggles!? And a Super Scope!?
seigfreid's Avatar - Comment posted on 02/10/2009 22:32
seigfreid
I neeeeeeeeed this comic in comic book form!!!!

This was great by the way, keep up the great work Mikey
Red TheHaze Veron's Avatar - Comment posted on 02/10/2009 22:33
Red TheHaze Veron
DOES ANYONE NOT NOTICE THE RED RETROPHONE DYSON WAS SPEAKING INTO??
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