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Check out my Valkyria Chronicles contest entry. Also *SQUEEEEEEEE-*
Josh Tolentino | 7:21 PM on 05.07.2009 17 comments




If I haven't posted recently, this is why: I've had Photoshop open for last week or so, working on my entry into Dtoid's Valkyria Chronicles contest. This is, of course, no surprise if you've ever read anything by me, but this is personally significant because it's the only time I've ever used Photoshop to do anything other than crop-and-chop. Well, to be fair I used Paint Shop Pro back eight-odd years ago to make a terrible, horrible webcomic, back when I was the kind of animu nerd that makes animu nerds look bad. For God's sake, it was on Keenspot. Keenspot! If ye dare, gaze upon the face of failure.

But I digress. Below are my entries to the contest. I actually cheated a bit by submitting both images as a one-file montage (I cleared it with Hamza), but below are the two separately. They've been resized to fit the blog because of that problem with Dtoid's image server or something.

I was going for a propaganda poster-ish look, one for each side of the war. Note that the art itself isn't mine. I just added the text, effects and background stuff. My notes below:

First, for the Empire:


Selvaria is the most recognizable character in the game (seconded only by the Edelweiss and Alicia's bonnet), and since she's with the Empire, it's no surprise that she'd be on an Imperial propaganda poster. Plus, she glows blue, which is definitely an attention-grabber. The Empire seems like the sort of nation that would try to inspire national fervor with honorable and noble-looking images, so I thought that whole "drive to the East/West" thing that was common in German and Russian propaganda would be in-character.

Next, for Gallia:


As you can see, on the Gallian end of the spectrum I decided to ape the more positive style of American and British propaganda posters. Unlike the Imperial poster, which tries to inspire and cast the war and its soldiers in an honorable, courageous light, the Gallian poster is much more straightforward, asking for enlistment outright and using the famous fighters of Squad 7 to sell the war.

I also decided to go with Alicia front-and-center rather than the Squad 7 group shot or a picture of the Edelweiss because of America's propensity towards creating characters that would-be supporters and identify with personally, the sort of thing Ellet might have come up with were she a poster-painter.

Plus, the particular picture I used (you might have recognized it from one of my older image dumps) had a style that really looked like the opposite of the picture I used for the Imperial poster. Like "Rosie the Riveter" or bomber-painted pin-up girls, the poster "sells" Squad 7 (and sweetie Sergeant Melchiott) with the rhyming slogans and the caption identifying the character. Actually, I'd have gone with Rosie if I could find some better art.

To be honest I think some actual Gallian propaganda styles would be similar to the Empire's. After all, Gallia is a principality and recruits its soldiers through a direct draft rather than as an occupation. In any case, I went with it to contrast with the Empire.

Logo-less and higher-res versions of the pics are in the gallery. What do you guys think?

Anyway, I hope I win. I actually have that art book (it was a pre-order bonus), so I'll give my copy to anyone who wants it should I win. I'm really in it for the figure.



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pedrovay2003's Avatar - Comment posted on 05/07/2009 19:42
pedrovay2003
Holy crap, you have much more talent than I do. I like the "Enlist Today" one the most, personally. :D

I've also decided I still need to buy this game.
pedrovay2003's Avatar - Comment posted on 05/07/2009 19:44
pedrovay2003
Also, how come your Paint Shop Pro picture is a white 1x1 pixel? :P
Josh Tolentino's Avatar - Comment posted on 05/07/2009 19:48
Josh Tolentino
@pedrovay2003

Weird. Must be some kind of anti-linking thing. I hoped not to do it, but here's a direct link to the site itself. Sigh.
IronPikeman's Avatar - Comment posted on 05/07/2009 19:57
IronPikeman
Selvaria's nips = Hard EX Mode... LOL

Awesome entries! I wish I wasn't so lazy or I'd enter, but I'm rooting for you dude!
Jack Maverick's Avatar - Comment posted on 05/07/2009 20:14
Jack Maverick
I give you an A for putting effort into your entries unlike my MS Paint thing. Anyway, here's wishing you good luck in your opportunity of winning those figures.
JohZho's Avatar - Comment posted on 05/07/2009 20:23
JohZho
Hmmmn... make the letters on "enlist now" one look a slight bit more "gritty" or maybe go for a more traditional font. The color scheme should be slightly washed out to match Alicia's uniform color, make it a slight bit more vibrant though. Background could be light brownish in color, or if you want it to be a bit more fancy you could go for some kind of paper texture BG.

Speech bubble should just overlap Alicia's hair piece, the way you have it where 3 things overlap looks a bit messy, it also makes certain text hard to read. Since Alicia's speech bubble font has a happy aura to it, you don't really need a happy font on "enlist now", this balances things out and also gives a more serious feel to the poster. The red fonted info on Alicia on bottom left should be black to make it look more like inked writting.

Sorry, I think I went overboard with critiques again. Don't take it harshly, I'm just damn picky. '^'
Josh Tolentino's Avatar - Comment posted on 05/07/2009 20:34
Josh Tolentino
@Jozo

Thanks for the critique.

I wanted to avoid changing the background color since the art was already so washed out, and when I used the directly sample colors from the Gallian flag everything looked so dull.

Still, I was intending to ape the famous Uncle Sam "I want you" poster, but since there was already a piece of official art that copied that, I tried to make it more like an ad.

Yeah, I do agree that I probably should have made the speech bubble overlap, but I didn't want to cut out her bonnet (so adorable!), and I didn't really have the chops to create a customized speech bubble (I pulled it off the default shape set.

As for the overlapping font, yeah I made a hash of it there. Maybe a different colored font would have worked better.

As for having a serious feel, I really wasn't going for that. You save that serious fonts for posters that tell you not to throw away scrap metal, lest the murdering jappo apes win.
Tubatic's Avatar - Comment posted on 05/07/2009 20:47
Tubatic
Give this man a figurine! Nice work! I dig the Alicia one. I immediately got that grassroots, everyone do their part sort of feel from that one.
JohZho's Avatar - Comment posted on 05/07/2009 20:49
JohZho
It's too bad you don't have Adobe Illustrator, makes stuff like the speech bubble and borders a lot easier to handle. Photoshop is just what the name implies, for photos and images, not too great for making shapes and aligning things.

I'm afraid If I critique too much I'll get burned so bad. =/
I still think you should make more room between Alicia and the speech bubble, maybe you could make the crest, Alicia, and "enlist now" an itsy bit smaller so you can move the bubble up a bit.

Best of luck on this contest! :) the first one looks fine as it is.
TheCleaningGuy's Avatar - Comment posted on 05/07/2009 21:00
TheCleaningGuy
Nice work! The Alicia one is my preference of the two. I like the colors on the Empire one, but Selvaria's nipples slightly distract the eye from the overall effect. Either way, both are better than anything I could do, I'm thoroughly impressed!
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If you win, could I bribe you for the artbook?
TheCleaningGuy's Avatar - Comment posted on 05/08/2009 09:39
TheCleaningGuy
Also, thought you should know: [url=http://kotaku.com/5245006/segas-sakura-wars-finally-coming-stateside-but-not-from-sega]Sakura Taisen is coming to the US![url]
Josh Tolentino's Avatar - Comment posted on 05/08/2009 10:30
Josh Tolentino
@thecleaningguy

Yeah, I head. Yehey!
Char Aznable's Avatar - Comment posted on 05/08/2009 11:10
Char Aznable
Holy fuck, Ironpikeman. I just noticed those things after you pointed it out. Good gawd, that's a bit extreme.
SgtLeon's Avatar - Comment posted on 05/08/2009 16:33
SgtLeon
Nice entry, really!

Kinda funny that you only want the figurine, and not the artbook, for me it's the other way around, i want the artbook, u already have the figurine, i really hope to have the 3rd, 4th or 5th place.
Naim Master's Avatar - Comment posted on 05/08/2009 16:48
Naim Master
Wow , those boobs were huge , even for anime standards ... Can you give me the Art Book , pleeeasseee , I'll pay for the delivery !
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