Seriously, though - this is a pretty good blog. It's jam-packed full of creativity and descriptive detail; something I feel is sadly lacking in the Community Blogs.
What the fuck did I just read? There's creative writing and then there's this garbled nonsense that sits on my page like the scribblings of a 7 year old after learning what the NRA is.
Since when did the cblogs become a space for people to write out their gun fantasies?
Since when did the cblogs become a space for people to write out their gun fantasies?
well I wrote this for the contest, and since none is crazy enough to read the whole 350 comments then I deiced to post this here.I'd like to see you write something better in about 10 minutes. no brain storming just a blank page and a Idea.
You're a Libyan rebel attacking a nationalist outpost, go. I want the page short story in my inbox by the end of the day bakewell.
Alright it sounds to me like you are in Houma. Now on West Park Avenue is the Southland Mall. That's pretty close to the pine forest so it shouldn't be a thing to get there on your motor bike.. I'm gonna need you to stop in the entrance near JC Penny and head over to Corn Dog 7.
Get me a number 2, extra hot mustard, and a Pepsi. When you order, talk to Niecey cause she give you the employee discount.
Get me a number 2, extra hot mustard, and a Pepsi. When you order, talk to Niecey cause she give you the employee discount.
I know about as much about being a libyan rebel as I do the menstrual cycle i.e. sweet fuck all. I could however write an entire trilogy about the finer points of making a delicious cup of tea. It would have about as much relevance to gaming as your blog. Infact, the only thing linking your blog to gaming is it's name.
Forgive me if I seem harsh but your blog just reads like a gun fantasy or a trailer for an action movie. Im sure it has much more appeal in the greater context of the writing.
Forgive me if I seem harsh but your blog just reads like a gun fantasy or a trailer for an action movie. Im sure it has much more appeal in the greater context of the writing.
Again, It was for a contest on the website Bakewell,I don't mind helpful comments regrading what i could do better,but to me it seems like you are nit picking.

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