"Welcome to the Girl's entertainment network."

well I know when I'm not wanted...

That was an extremely impressive site. Where in the world do guys find the girls like you!? Ah..... I see..... band camp......
I will be back one day, after an extensive tour of America's band camps.

Nice work!

Great work!

Wisconsin it is! Fine cheese and geeky ladies FTW!

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Good read.

Great job yet again, VirtualGirl! Beyond the Hype is a highly informative site that is also well laid-out, and I’m sure it’ll serve the public well. I just have a few minor corrections to the Introduction (small stuff):

Paragraph 2, sentence 4: it should say “disdain” instead of “distain”, and there shouldn’t be a “the” before “Saw or Hostel”

Paragraph 2, sentence 6: “first amendment” should be capitalized

Paragraph 4, sentence 2: I’d rephrase “about the industry as well as the current political climate as pertains to video games and common misconceptions about this form of entertainment” to something like “about the industry and the current political climate as they pertain to video games, as well as common misconceptions about this form of entertainment”.

Paragraph 6, sentence 4: if you’re talking about the introduction, it should say “foreword” instead of “forward”

Otherwise, though, that was a great read.

Thanks guys! I am really glad you like it!

@Br0nxb0mBr: I NEED TO HAVE YOU PROOFREAD MY STUFF!! LOL. I had both my parents and my hubby read through every word before I put it online, and none of us caught those errors! You have a sharp eye!

Don't worry! you have to do more than that to come across creepy!

VG, that is an excellent website. It's nice to have a place to send people that want to blame things on video games. WEll done.

@Virtualgirl: Thanks! Yeah, it’s strange...I hated English as a subject in school, but I’m nuts about its proper use — spelling, grammar, punctuation, etc. Again, though, none of those mistakes were serious, so don’t think that you, your parents, or your husband aren’t good at proofreading. I miss errors occasionally as well — when you’re dealing with a wall of text (and even when you aren’t), the words tend to blur into each other, and you just start skimming. I only caught those four minor mistakes because I wasn’t purposefully proofreading; I was interested in what your site had to offer, and I wanted to read the entire introduction. When I read normally, I’ll usually catch more errors than if I’m trying to proof something. Regardless, please feel free to send me stuff to proofread if you like (see my profile for my email address); I’m only taking the bare minimum of credits this semester, so I’ll have a lot of free time on my hands.

I love the site; it's a great idea! Can I make a little design suggestion though? You know the way to get to the next page of a multi-page section you have to click on the numbers at the bottom of the page? If you don't have the page enlarged to full size, you don't see these numbers so, on a page with a small amount of text, there's no way to tell what you're meant to click on to proceed. Just put a little continue prompt at the bottom of each text section, along with the number system for swift navigation of multiple pages and I think that'll solve it.

Really is a cracking site design. I'm very impressed, as always.