For everyone who missed it, Bounty was an experimental comic I began in honor of 24-Hour Comic Day last weekend. The basic premise was that it would be a forum comic like MS Paint Adventures, with one simple twist: Multiplayer. Two forums were made, one for TIGSource, and one for Destructoid. The original plan was to have the game conclude within the 24-hour time limit, but complications arrived that prevented me from doing that. Nevertheless, the last pages were posted a couple days ago, and I've decided to take some time to analyze the project.
WHAT WENT RIGHT
It was finished- Never underestimate this. When it comes to projects, I have a habit of biting off far more than I can chew, so I was determined to not let this experiment get out of hand. Ever since I'd heard about 24-Hour Comic Day, I'd been wanting to participate, and this seemed like the perfect way to ensure that I would get the darn thing done. Even after running into every single problem possible (more on that later), I was stubborn enough to not give up.
Improvisation Forum adventure comics are by nature made up almost entirely on the spot, and Bounty was no exception. Among others, these are a few things I didn't plan and/or just made up on the spot:
-The dream sequence
-The ex-girlfriend
-The metaphor behind the Tape Measurer of the Sea (seriously, that came out of nowhere)
-The catbomb(s)
Aside from the comic itself, I had to improvise a bit for when my tech started futzing up. After the first three pages, my tablet started acting weird, so I ended up drawing the rest of the comic on sketchbook paper with ballpoint pen. Not only that, but I drew all of the pages without any penciling or layouts- all pure pen, with no planning whatsoever. And then when my scanner refused to connect to my computer (again), I decided to simply photograph the last three pages. I personally like the sepia tone effect that occurred as a result, but of course that's just me.
WHAT WENT WRONG
Technology- First was my tablet. I love my Wacom Bamboo, but it has this nasty habit of going nuts in Photoshop. At seemingly random times, it'll lose pressure sensitivity and not even recognize the other end of the stylus. This would not do, so I switched to good old pen and paper. Then one of the forums got locked for about four hours- both moderators were offline, and no one seems to know how it got locked in the first place. And then after all that, my printer refused to connect to my laptop, so I decided to photograph the pages with my camera, but the camera's batteries were running low and I didn't have any more AAs... All this didn't kill the project per se, but it made it a helluva lot harder to get through.
Momentum- The other major issue was trying to keep people playing the game at the odd hours of the morning. For several hours after starting, there was not a single person posting in the Destructoid thread. I didn't want to make the character do anything autonomously, so I just let him sleep. This eventually led to the weird dream sequence, which I suppose made it worthwhile, but it was still a bit of a pain. The other major roadblock came when the TIGSource thread got locked (again, for no apparent reason). I didn't want to just continue the game on Destructoid (as it would have been an unfair advantage), so I let it sit for several hours, which is basically why it took me a week to finish what should have been done in 24 hours.
All in all, I'm pleased with how the comic turned out. I'd certainly like to try more multiplayer comics like this, especially if I can do it with you guys. Now that Bounty's over, what are your thoughts on it? Any suggestions for what you'd like to see in the next comic?
Just finished this today. My printer's giving me hell for it (I think I'm gonna need a new ink cartridge soon), but
overall I'm super-happy with how it turned out. I've been thinking about doing more covers like these, but I'd like to
take random requests, see what games could really use some nice-looking artwork. What do you guys think of
the Psychonauts box, and what game covers would you like to see me do next? If I sold these online, through
Etsy or somewhere else, would you want a copy for yourselves?
Okay, technically my summer vacation isn't over just yet, but it's close enough that I can start offering a
retrospective. So, aside from the usual hanging out with friends and volunteer work, I've kept myself busy
with a variety of projects both big and small.
Back in May, ModDB.com held a contest for new shirt designs. Mine was one of the three finalists, and is now
being sold through their online store here. Below is the front to the shirt.
These are my new shoes- blank slip-ons after a week's worth of inking. You can't see it, but there's extra
stuff on the sides and the back. I filled the shoes with all of the things that have influenced my work and
personality. See how much you can name!
A school that a friend of mine goes to was wanting to do a mural based on Shel Silverstein's Where the
Sidewalk Ends, but couldn't because of copyright issues. The friend contacted me, and I designed a mural
loosely based on the cover. Shel Silverstein's books made a huge impression on me as a youngster, so this
project is one of my personal favorites.
The Choose-Your-Own Adventures of Bucky Swash is an online comic experiment I've been running on and
off this summer. The readers in the forum here submit suggestions, wherein I take the best of those suggestions and turn it into the next page. It's been very
fun so far, and I'd like to see how far we can take it.
Now this some people might have seen. I was commissioned by WryGuy on the D-Toid forums to design him a
custom cover for Katamari Damacy, and I was more than happy to oblige. It took exactly a month's worth of
digital painting in Photoshop, but I'm very pleased with how it turned out. The fact that the editors wrote an
article on it made it even sweeter.
I did say this would be videogame related, yes? Well, you can't get much more videogame-related than talking
about an actual game! Commedia Dell'arte: The Game is my new major project- Commedia, for those who don't
know, is the ancient Italian improv theatre that literally invented slapstick. The game will allow the players to
control the major masked characters in what we're tentatively calling a "strategic storytelling game". If you're
interested, you can find out more info on our DevLog on the website
here.
Well, that's all for now, I hope you all had a great summer, and I'll see you...
Since I don't have premium DA account, I figured I'd go ahead and post all the little animation projects I've done
here instead. This fall I'm heading to college for Media Informatics, which is essentially animation with some
web design thrown in for good measure, so hopefully this won't be the last post.
As a little side project, I made a quick loop to learn how to use anticipation, squash and stretch, and all those
neat little tricks from the good ol' days.
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=fAVZ1d9ml5g
Then, we worked on our first big 3D project. All the models were made in Swift 3D and textured in Photoshop.
Although I hate that the rendering screwed up the second half, at least you get a good glimpse at the creepy
sun I made.
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=IN_73jMQOc4
Finally, I have this project I started several weeks ago- 3D models in Swift 3D again and hand-drawn animation
in Flash- not a single motion tween in sight. A little rough, but overall I'm terribly pleased with how it came out.
You can check it out here:
Since I made that one, I've colored the figures to make it look a little nicer. I'll probably stick it in this post, once
I've finished uploading it. EDIT: And here it is.
This one I just finished today- it was supposed to be a birthday gift for a friend of mine, but it took two weeks
longer than I'd initially planned. Hope she likes it...
(This is a re-do of an older post that was screwed up by Google Chrome. The original has since been deleted.)
I've always been fascinated by tabletop games- after all, D&D is where a lot of modern video games came from, and the idea of building a story with a bunch of friends sounded like a ton of fun to me. So, I played Dungeons and Dragons for the first time- or, at least, tried to. Just one look at the character creation sheet scared me shitless. What were all these numbers doing in a storytelling game, anyway? What's the difference between Strength and Constitution? When do I get to play this game? Eventually I got started, but in the back of my mind, I kept thinking to myself, there has to be a better way of doing this. Not one to simply complain, I decided that I would design my own system, taking elements of the Dungeons and Dragon ruleset and boiling them down to their essential core. The result...
SEXY ADVENTURE TIME!
All right, it's just a working title, but the real point is to make a system that's easy to grasp so that players can get on with the actual game. This is not meant to supplant D&D, though- for experienced roleplayers, this is a more relaxed and fun version of the game they already know how to play, and should fit in easily. Newcomers will be able to grasp Sexy Adventure Time's rules very quickly, and can use this as a stepping stone for more complex RPGs if they so choose.
But enough talk, how does Sexy Adventure Time actually work? Well, you start off by creating a character. Your sheet will have the following:
Character Name
Player Name
Physical Description
They will also have the following, under the subcategory Skills:
Strength
Speed
Smarts
Special
The first part's pretty self-explanatory, but the Skills section is a bit different. The player assigns a number to the skills; one is given a 3, another a 2, and the last a 1. These numbers indicate how, er, skilled they are in that particular area, 3 being your best and 1 being your worst. The Special skill is always 4, and can be any unique gift the player desires. The more obscure or seemingly pointless, the better. Besides the player's health, these are the only numbers needed in the game, and are used in what are called conflicts. Let's use an example conflict to demonstrate how the system works.
Mr. Player wants to punch a goon in the face. Since he is physically attacking a character, the DM (or Narrator as they are named in SAT) decides to use the player's Strength stat, a 3. The goon, meanwhile, does not like being punched, and so will try to dodge the blow. This will use their Speed stat, a measly 1. The Narrator and the player both roll a die (it doesn't mater how many sides they have). The Narrator comes up with 3, and Mr. Player rolls a 4.
Mr. Player has successfully punched the goon in the face. From here, the Narrator can take 3 points (the difference between the rolls) off of the goon's health, and add some story bits about him being knocked
backward. Easy, yes?
"But wait," you may say. "Where do I use each stat, and when?" The answer is easy: Whenever you want. The real trick to Sexy Adventure Time is that your luck is not only influenced what you say, but how you say it. If Mr. Player had a 3 in Speed instead of Strength, he could say that he wanted his character to sneak up behind the goon and then punch him in the face. The Narrator, likewise, can use this to either help or hinder the players, depending on how successful they have been. In our first example, if the goon had a 3 in Strength, the Narrator could have described him wanting to block Mr. Player's punch, making it a more even match. By encouraging players to play to their character's strengths, they can get more into the role they've created for themselves and enhance their own playing experience. I'll go more in-depth with possible strategies for both players and Narrators, as well as other gameplay devices on the next installment. Until next time...
So I've just finished my memoir comic, and I'm quite pleased with how it turned out. Of course there are things I'd like to tweak, like the thickness of the borders, some illegible text, etc. but overall I think I'm getting better at this thing. After this, I'm likely going to return to The Island, a satirical fairytale I started last year, but had to let sit for various reasons (mostly school and planning for college). I started thinking about what I could do with my work, and around the same time my parents have been telling me I need to get a job for the summer.
So here's what I'm thinking: Self-publishing's getting way cheaper, right? Lulu.com and places like that are available for people to print out their own books and sell them online or in person, with the sites taking a chunk of the profits for printing materials and suchlike. What I'd like to do is, once The Island is complete, to go back and do those tweaks on it and the memoir comic, and sell those as the "definitive editions". The changes likely wouldn't be drastic- again, it would likely be things like fixing my messy handwriting to make it easier on the eyes. The original versions would still be up online- this way, you know exactly what you'd be paying for.
Aside from the comics, I've been designing my own pen-and-paper RPG system, tentatively titled "Sexy Adventure Time". Like the comics, I'll post the basic rules online, so people know what they're paying for, but as a bonus for buying the book (which isn't going to be terribly long- it's a pretty simple and flexible system), I'll be filling it with illustrations- maybe even in color!
Unfortunately, a lot of it is going to depend on how many people are interested in buying my work. What say ye, Tokyopop?
(P.S. Any ideas for a good store name? I'm not sure I want to use Otaku42 as part of it, so any suggestions are welcome.)
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